Editing part 3.

In the next media lesson that we had I watched over our piece and realised that the voice over was far to quiet and desperately needed recording again. We asked Eve and she recorded it again for us. This time we recorded it as one big piece instead of separating the letter and recording it in different parts. I cut the whole recording down and we ended up adding a few extra parts which were:
“'I've sent these rose petals to remind you of our deep and everlasting love.”
And “You make my heart content and I wont be complete until I'm back in your arms once more.” We thought these fit the character Jenny very well and showed her need to be with William and the love she has for him.